Not bad
Some interesting ideas but I feel that nothing really gets enough time to form a satisfying progression, due to the constant mood shifts and the short play time for a trance track (this is more like radio edit length). The same arpeggiated synth/piano becomes a bit tiring after a while. I really liked the near-hardstyle ending that you have on here, it's very fitting!
thanks for the input. the mid section is dragged out. and the transitions are quick. i feel your views.
Me like
Great production! I like the flow of this track, you introduce new themes that are relevant to the voice of this piece without breaking concentration. I might have enjoyed the kick a bit more if it had an 8k boost, or another layer to give it a pronounced attack. Good stuff.
Nice!
Decent mood overall, it is rather adventurous. I would suggest changing up the leitmotif of the staccato strings a little bit though, as the repetition becomes to be a bit much halfway through this piece. I also think the percussion could do with some variance in both timbre and rhythm.
I appreciated this track and I think you have good talent with a lot of room to grow, just like myself. Thanks for creating this!
As with every track I submit, I'm merely trying out now things with instrumentation - in this particular case I really wanted to try out one of the hollywood-styles of composing for the strings, and I must say that this is one of those songs I am rather comfortable with the strings, I do however agree with the point of it getting repetitive.
Thank you for your kind words, and I must say that I particularly enjoyed your work in the desert theme you created.
--Christian S.
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